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The landlord that did not remember Moses – Cynthia Omo | #SYL 2016

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THE LANDLORD THAT DID NOT REMEMBER MOSES

by Cynthia Omo

Uncle Jide or Oga Landlord as co-tenants in the estate would call him was daddy’s best friend. He and daddy were roommates in school, so when daddy got married, Uncle Jide let him have a flat in his house without ever taking a dime from him. I know this because daddy and uncle never ceased to fill our ears (mum’s and mine) with these stories every time uncle Jide came over for dinner which was pretty much every evening.

Uncle Jide lost his wife to the cold hands of death but didn’t lose his sense of humor and kind heart. He would buy me lots and lots of presents even when it wasn’t my birthday.

We all lived in peace in our little estate until tragedy struck. Daddy died and barely two weeks after, we lost Uncle Jide too. He died in his sleep. We all assumed he just couldn’t live with the shock of losing his friend – my dad.

I thought the worst had happened but this was just the beginning of our travails.

Uncle Shile, a short, pot-bellied, and very unkempt man, who introduced himself as Uncle Jide’s elder brother and new “oga landlord” moved into the estate to become our worst night mare.

A time came when he insisted on seeing the receipts of rent payments for every flat in the building. When he got to us, I sat at the corner of our sitting room and watched as mum tried to explain how things worked when Uncle Jide was alive, but like the Biblical Pharaoh, who didn’t know Moses, Uncle Shile claimed that things had changed and he would not only begin to collect our rents but also collect the ones for the past two years. This, he termed being merciful.

“I for collect all the moni wey you dey owe but because I be better person, just pay for the last two years.” He said.

I watched mum beg him to show understanding as we had just spent a lot of money on dad’s burial and other expenses but he would have none of it.

The next day was a wet one. It rained heavily but this did not stop Mr. Shile from bringing two men who threw all our belongings out.

I cried as I picked up the sketch pad that Uncle Jide bought for me the previous year. I hurriedly flipped through the pages trying to find my most treasured possession – a scholarship application form dad bought just before his death, but it had been soiled with mud.

That was it for me, in that moment everything changed. I looked up to the skies as rain drops poured unending, cried out loud and reached out to the Real Estate Flier I picked from my teacher’s table the previous day. I took a long look at it and made a resolve to save every penny I make till I can sack my landlord.

 

– Cynthia Omo

 

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29 comments

  1. Cool! That’s a clever way of lonkiog at it!

  2. Actually, its very much lovely. Little but filled with the right recipe. Kudos Dearie

  3. Great piece, sis. Kudos!!

  4. Lovely writeup CY.

  5. Oluwole Oluwaseesin

    In every story, there are triggers to read on till the very last word. This short story is touching, and i say kudos to you Cynthia Omo.
    Udeolisa Onyinyechi has done a good one by persuading me to come here to check this short story. I give my vote to you.

  6. This is spectacular, and so emotional… I can’t believe a tear drop almost ran down my cheek. God is your strength dear

  7. Sherif Mufutau Adekunle

    Good and nice write up. What a brilliant writer. Aam moved.good work

  8. Fantastic story. But clicking on ratings always rates it 1.75 over here. I don’t know why.

  9. Oladapo Rasheed Tolulope

    Nice one. Bravoooooooooo

  10. Thank you… Gracias

  11. I love your article @ Cynthia

  12. Nice article i love it, it touching

  13. Awwww… This is so emotional. The death of dad and uncle Jide within two weeks would have been a lot to take in for you. You will get there, dear. Thumbs up.

  14. Nice article and great choice of title. I felt touched by it.

  15. The story was short but I get the Message.
    Lovely.

  16. Wow, I am really touched by this story. Thanks for sharing

  17. d man dat matas

    TOUCHING!!! well constructed…

  18. TWow! What an intresting tragic story. I know something in life that, if you hadn’t been faced with chalenges,you won’t yet remember what life is and how you really gots to triumph in it. Sure.

  19. What a touching story full of ideas. You actually av a short but concise in depth. Great job from u Cynthia.

  20. Badmus Tolulope

    nice story dear… though short buh touching…

  21. Thank you so much for taking time to read through and also leave comments. Appreciate it.

  22. Adedeji Oluwatosin

    The story is a true expression of creativity…Its a summary of how great things begin..how we make a great success out of the challenge that happens to us,its a great expression of how we turn our challenges in life to stepping stones for great achievements in life…thanks Cynthia Omo..

  23. This write up is the standard. Nice one Cynthia.

  24. Thank you so much for the comments. The story was short because we were given a word boundary. Thanks again

  25. Wow! Wow!! Wow!!!
    Who’s this amazing writer nitori olorun?
    *in Falz’ voice* The pesin is oviously a geh!!!
    *pick us phone and askes arand for her contact, 30 minutes later*
    Me: Ello bae! Notifie me your plaze of prevrenze, let me show you han impazzionate display of afluence… You har zuch a fine writer… I’m himpressed…

  26. An amazing story, though short, it still covers the basics a sound introduction, good body and finally a conclusion with a message.

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